what if neglected naruto raised by kami, yami and shinigami after death of minato and kushina
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# Chapter 1: The Night Everything Changed
The alley reeked of rotting vegetables and human cruelty.
Eight-year-old Naruto Uzumaki pressed his back against the cold brick wall, every breath sending lightning bolts of agony through his cracked ribs. Blood trickled from his split lip, metallic and warm on his tongue. Above him, the autumn moon hung like a pale witness to the village's shame.
"Monster." The word echoed in his skull, spoken by voices both young and old. "Demon child." "Should have died with his parents."
Parents. The word was a foreign concept, a fairy tale other children possessed but he could never touch.
His orange jacket—the only splash of color in his gray world—was torn at the shoulder, revealing angry purple bruises blooming across his pale skin. The fabric clung to him, sodden with October rain that had started falling an hour ago, mixing with his tears until he couldn't tell the difference.
"Why?" The question scraped from his throat, barely audible above the distant thunder. "What did I do?"
He'd only wanted ramen. Just one bowl from Ichiraku's, paid for with coins scrounged from between couch cushions and forgotten in gutters. But the shop owner had taken one look at his face and slammed the wooden flap shut so hard it rattled.
"We don't serve your kind here."
Your kind. As if he were something other than human.
The chase had started when he'd lingered too long outside the shop, stomach gnawing at itself with hunger. A group of academy students—kids his own age who should have been friends—had surrounded him like a pack of wolves.
"Look, it's the demon brat."
"My dad says he killed the Fourth Hokage."
"My mom crosses the street when she sees him coming."
The first rock had caught him in the temple. After that, everything became a blur of running feet, shouted curses, and the terrible certainty that no one would come to help.
Now, huddled in this forgotten corner of Konoha where even the streetlights seemed to avoid him, Naruto felt something inside his chest crack wider than his ribs. Not just pain—something deeper. Something that might have been hope, finally giving up and dying.
"I didn't ask to be born," he whispered to the uncaring sky. "I didn't ask for any of this."
Rain drummed against the tin roof above, a steady rhythm that seemed to mock his words. Worthless, worthless, worthless.
His small fists clenched, fingernails digging crescents into his palms. The anger felt good—clean and hot compared to the cold emptiness that usually lived in his stomach. But even rage couldn't fill the hollow spaces where love should have lived.
"Why won't someone—anyone—just tell me what I did wrong?"
The question hung in the air, desperate and raw. For a heartbeat, the world seemed to hold its breath. Even the rain paused, droplets suspended like crystal tears.
Then the alley filled with light.
Not harsh electric brilliance, but something gentler—golden warmth that seemed to emanate from the very air itself. The shadows retreated, and suddenly Naruto could breathe without his ribs screaming in protest.
"You did nothing wrong, child."
The voice came from everywhere and nowhere, soft as silk yet strong enough to make the walls themselves seem to lean in and listen. Naruto's head snapped up, blue eyes wide and searching.
"Who's there?" His voice cracked on the words. "I—I don't have any money if you're here to rob me. I don't have anything."
A figure stepped from the light—or perhaps became the light. She was tall and graceful, with skin that seemed to glow from within and hair that flowed like liquid starlight. Her eyes held the depth of ancient forests and the kindness of every mother Naruto had never known.
"You have more than you know, Naruto Uzumaki." She knelt beside him, and suddenly the alley floor felt soft as summer grass. "You have a heart that refuses to break, despite everything they've put you through. You have a spirit that burns brighter than the sun, even when they try to snuff it out."
"You know my name." Wonder crept into his voice, pushing aside fear. "Nobody knows my name. Nobody cares."
Her smile could have melted winter itself. "I am Kami, little one. I am the spirit of all growing things, the breath between the words of every prayer. And I have been watching you."
"Watching me do what? Fail at everything? Get beaten up? Disappoint everyone?"
"Watching you survive." Her hand hovered just above his cheek, not quite touching but radiating warmth that soothed his bruises. "Watching you choose kindness when the world shows you only cruelty. Watching you refuse to let their hatred poison your heart."
Naruto's breath hitched. "But I do hate them. Sometimes I hate them so much I can't think of anything else."
"And that's human. That's real. But tell me—when Iruka-sensei trips and drops his papers, what do you do?"
"I... I help him pick them up."
"When you see a stray cat in the rain, what do you do?"
"Share my food." The answer came automatically, memories of countless soggy rice balls broken in half for creatures as hungry and forgotten as himself.
"When a classmate cries because they failed a test, what do you do?"
"Tell them they'll do better next time." His voice grew stronger. "Make them laugh if I can."
Kami's smile blazed like dawn breaking over mountains. "That is why I'm here, Naruto. Not because you're perfect, but because you're perfectly yourself—flawed and hurting and beautiful in ways they'll never understand."
"But I'm weak. I can't even do a proper clone jutsu. I can't protect myself, let alone anyone else."
"Strength comes in many forms." She gestured, and the golden light swirled around them both like living silk. "What if I told you that true power isn't about being the strongest or the fastest or the most skilled? What if I told you it's about being the most yourself?"
Something stirred in Naruto's chest—not hope, not yet, but maybe the memory of what hope felt like. "What are you saying?"
"I'm saying that you don't have to face this alone anymore." Kami's eyes held promises of secrets yet to be revealed. "I'm saying that there are those who see your true worth, even if the village is blind to it. I'm saying that your real training—your real education—begins tonight."
"Training?" Naruto struggled to sit up straighter, ignoring the protests from his battered body. "You mean like ninja training? But I'm terrible at—"
"Not ninja training. Something older. Something deeper." The light around them pulsed like a heartbeat. "I want to teach you about balance, Naruto. About harmony with the world around you. About finding the strength that lives not in your muscles, but in your spirit."
For the first time in years—maybe ever—Naruto felt seen. Really, truly seen. Not as the demon child or the class fool or the walking reminder of tragedy, but as... himself. Just himself. And somehow, in this stranger's glowing presence, that felt like enough.
"Why?" The question came out smaller than a whisper. "Why would you help me?"
Kami's expression grew infinitely tender. "Because everyone deserves at least one person who believes in them, little sun. And because I have the feeling that you're going to change this world—but first, you need to learn who you really are."
The rain had stopped entirely now, though Naruto hadn't noticed when. The alley felt transformed—not just by the light, but by possibility itself. He could feel it humming in the air like potential energy waiting to be released.
"I don't understand any of this," he said honestly. "I don't know who you are or why you're here or what any of this means."
"Understanding will come." Kami rose gracefully, her form already beginning to fade back into light. "For now, all you need to know is this: tomorrow night, when the moon reaches its peak, come to the old training ground beyond the village walls. The one where the ancient oak grows by the stream."
"Will you be there?"
"I will be there. And Naruto?" She paused, her voice carrying the weight of prophecy. "Bring your questions. Bring your anger. Bring your pain. But most importantly, bring yourself—all of yourself, hidden parts and all. The journey we're about to begin will require nothing less than your complete truth."
"What journey?" But the light was already fading, taking her with it.
Her final words seemed to come from the wind itself: "The journey to becoming who you were always meant to be."
And then Naruto was alone in the alley again. But the cold brick at his back felt different now—not harsh and unforgiving, but solid and real. His ribs still ached, his lip still bled, but something fundamental had shifted in the space between one heartbeat and the next.
For the first time in his eight years of life, Naruto Uzumaki wasn't truly alone.
He touched his cheek where her hand had almost rested, feeling warmth that had nothing to do with temperature and everything to do with being seen, being chosen, being... valued.
"Kami," he whispered, testing the name on his tongue. It felt right. It felt like the beginning of something vast and terrifying and wonderful.
Thunder rumbled in the distance, but it sounded different now—not threatening, but promising. Like the world itself was clearing its throat, preparing to speak words that would change everything.
Naruto pushed himself to his feet, swaying slightly but standing firm. His orange jacket still hung in tatters, his body still bore the marks of the village's hatred, but his blue eyes burned with something that hadn't been there an hour ago.
Purpose.
Tomorrow night, when the moon reached its peak, he would go to the old training ground. He would meet this impossible woman who glowed like sunlight and spoke like poetry. He would begin this mysterious journey that promised to teach him who he really was.
But tonight—tonight he would go home to his empty apartment, tend to his wounds, and dream of golden light and voices that spoke his name with something that might, possibly, be love.
The boy who walked out of that alley was still Naruto Uzumaki—still eight years old, still alone, still carrying scars both visible and hidden. But he was also something new, something the village had never seen before.
He was a child with a guardian angel.
And in a world where demons were feared and hatred ran deep as underground rivers, that made all the difference.
# Chapter 2: Whispers in the Shadows
The ancient oak stood like a cathedral against the star-drunk sky.
Naruto pressed through the undergrowth beyond Konoha's walls, every footstep muffled by moss and fallen leaves that crunched secrets beneath his worn sandals. The training ground lay forgotten here—too far from the village for academy students, too peaceful for serious shinobi who preferred their practice grounds scarred with kunai marks and scorched earth.
Perfect for conversations with impossible women made of light.
His ribs still ached from yesterday's beating, purple-black bruises mapping cruelty across his torso like a child's angry finger painting. But he'd come anyway. Of course he'd come. What eight-year-old could resist the promise of magic in a world that offered him nothing but closed doors and turned backs?
The oak's massive trunk could have housed a small family, its bark worn smooth by centuries of weather and prayer. At its base, a crystal stream chuckled to itself, carrying moonlight like liquid silver between smooth stones. Everything here felt old—older than the village, older than the ninja wars, older than human memory itself.
"I wasn't sure you'd come."
Naruto spun, heart hammering against his ribs. Kami stepped from behind the oak's bulk as if she'd been part of the tree itself moments before. Tonight she wore robes that seemed woven from mist and starlight, her feet bare against the moss. That impossible hair still flowed like captured aurora, and her eyes held the patient depth of geological time.
"You're real." The words tumbled out before he could stop them. "I thought maybe I dreamed you. People don't usually—I mean, nobody ever—"
"Breathe, little sun." Her laugh carried the music of wind through bamboo. "Yes, I'm real. And yes, this is really happening."
Naruto sucked in a shaky breath, tasting night-blooming jasmine and possibilities. "So what now? Do I call you sensei? Do we start with pushups? Kakashi-sensei always makes us do pushups until we puke."
"Nothing so mundane." Kami settled cross-legged beside the stream, her robes pooling around her like captured moonbeams. "Sit with me, Naruto. Feel the earth beneath you."
He dropped down across from her, fidgeting with the hem of his jacket. "Feel the earth? That's it?"
"Close your eyes."
"But—"
"Trust me."
The words carried such gentle authority that his eyelids fluttered shut without conscious decision. Immediately, the world exploded into sensation. The moss beneath him pulsed with microscopic life. The stream's babbling resolved into individual water droplets kissing stone. Somewhere in the canopy above, an owl questioned the darkness in liquid notes.
"What do you feel?" Kami's voice seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere.
"The ground is... warm? And it's moving. Like it's breathing."
"Because it is. Everything here is alive, Naruto. The earth, the trees, the water, the air itself. They're all connected, all part of one great living system. And you—" her voice moved closer, "—you're part of it too."
Naruto's eyes snapped open. "I am?"
"Place your hand flat against the moss. Feel with more than just your palm."
He pressed his hand down, concentrating. For a moment, nothing. Then—
"Oh." The word escaped as a breathless whisper.
Energy. Slow and vast and ancient, thrumming through the earth like a massive heartbeat. It felt aware somehow, this planet-pulse. Not intelligent exactly, but... present. Watching. Welcoming.
"I can feel it," he gasped. "It's like—like the whole world is alive and it knows I'm here."
"Now you begin to understand." Kami's smile could have powered the village for a week. "This is the foundation of everything I want to teach you. Not jutsu or combat forms, but connection. Harmony. The ability to work with the world's natural energy instead of fighting against it."
"Is this how you do it? How you glow and appear from nowhere and make everything feel different?"
"Partly." She dipped her fingers in the stream, and where she touched, the water began to luminescence with soft blue light. "I am what your kind calls a nature spirit—a kami. I exist in the spaces between heartbeats, in the pause between raindrops, in the moment when seed becomes sprout. My power comes from being perfectly aligned with the natural world."
Naruto stared at the glowing water, mesmerized. "And you can teach me to do that?"
"I can teach you to find your own version of it." The light in the water pulsed like a slow heartbeat. "Every person has a unique relationship with the world's energy. Your job is to discover yours."
"But what if I'm too stupid? What if I can't—"
"Stop." The single word carried enough force to silence crickets. "That voice in your head—the one telling you you're not good enough, smart enough, worthy enough—that's not your voice, Naruto. That's theirs. The villagers who hurt you, the teachers who overlook you, the children who throw stones. You've been carrying their poison so long you think it's your own blood."
Heat prickled behind his eyes. "Then whose voice should I listen to?"
"Mine, for now. Until you remember your own." She leaned forward, intensity blazing in her ancient gaze. "You are not stupid, little sun. You are not worthless. You are not a mistake or a monster or any of the cruel things they've called you. You are a child with an enormous heart and unlimited potential, and it's time you started believing that."
The words hit him like physical blows, but good ones—like someone had been pounding dents into his soul and she was carefully hammering them back out. "I want to believe you. But how do I know you're not just being nice?"
"Because I don't lie, and I don't waste time on lost causes." Her voice carried the absolute certainty of sunrise. "Close your eyes again. This time, instead of feeling the earth, I want you to feel yourself."
"Feel myself?"
"Your chakra. The energy that lives inside you. Don't try to mold it or shape it—just acknowledge it. Say hello."
Naruto squeezed his eyes shut and turned his attention inward. At first, nothing but the usual chaos of thoughts and worries. Then, gradually, he became aware of something else. Something vast and warm and...
"Whoa." His eyes flew open. "There's a lot of it. Like, a lot lot. Is that normal?"
Kami's expression had gone very still. "Show me."
"How?"
"The same way you've been trying to make clones. But this time, don't force it. Don't wrestle with it. Just... invite it to dance with you."
Naruto formed the familiar hand seals, but instead of fighting his chakra into submission, he asked it politely to help. Please, he thought. I want to learn. I want to be better.
The response was immediate and overwhelming.
Golden light erupted from his skin like a sunrise, washing the entire clearing in warm radiance. Three perfect shadow clones materialized around him—not the sad, droopy failures he usually produced, but solid, grinning copies that looked exactly like him.
"Holy shit," said Clone One.
"Did we just—" Clone Two started.
"—actually do it right?" Clone Three finished.
"Language," Kami murmured, but she was smiling. "And yes, you did it perfectly."
The clones high-fived each other before dissolving in puffs of smoke, their joy lingering in the air like warm spice. Naruto stared at his hands, watching the golden glow fade from his skin.
"I did that?"
"You did that." Kami's voice held wonder and something else—pride, maybe? "Your chakra responded to kindness, Naruto. To partnership instead of domination. That's a very rare gift."
"Really?"
"Really. Most shinobi spend years learning to work with their chakra instead of against it. You just did it naturally, on your first try."
Warmth spread through his chest, different from the chakra glow but just as real. When was the last time someone had been proud of him? When had anyone ever called him gifted?
"What's next?" The question burst out eager and breathless. "What else can you teach me?"
Kami rose gracefully, her robes settling around her like settling snow. "Patience, for one thing. Power without wisdom is dangerous, and wisdom takes time to grow. For tonight, I want you to practice what we just did. Not the clone jutsu—that was just proof of concept. I want you to practice listening to your chakra, feeling how it wants to move."
"That's it?"
"That's everything." She began to fade, becoming translucent as moonlight. "True strength isn't about flashy techniques or overwhelming force, little sun. It's about understanding yourself so completely that you can work miracles with a whisper."
"Wait!" Naruto scrambled to his feet. "When will I see you again?"
"Tomorrow night. Same place, same time." Her voice was already distant, echoing from somewhere beyond the physical world. "And Naruto? Trust yourself. You have everything you need inside you already."
Then she was gone, leaving only the scent of blooming flowers and the memory of golden light.
Naruto stood alone in the clearing, but it was a different kind of alone than he'd known before. This wasn't the hollow isolation of his apartment or the walking loneliness of village streets. This was solitude—chosen, peaceful, full of potential.
He settled back down beside the stream, placing his palm against the moss. The earth's slow pulse greeted him like an old friend, and his own chakra stirred in response—warm and curious and eager to learn.
"Hello," he whispered to both energies, and could have sworn he felt them whisper back.
Time became elastic. Minutes or hours passed as he sat there, not training in any traditional sense but simply being—present and connected and, for the first time in his life, unashamed of his own existence.
The moon had traveled halfway across the sky when shadows began moving wrong at the edge of his vision.
Not shifting with wind or cloud cover—moving independently, pooling and flowing like liquid darkness. Naruto tensed, hand moving instinctively toward the kunai he didn't carry.
"Peace, child of daylight."
The voice emerged from the shadows themselves—neither male nor female, neither young nor old, but something altogether other. It carried the weight of midnight confessions and the whisper of secrets too dark for daylight ears.
"Who's there?" Naruto called, proud when his voice didn't shake. "Show yourself!"
"I am showing myself. You simply aren't looking in the right place."
The shadows beneath the oak tree coalesced, thickening until they held almost-human form. Tall and lean, draped in darkness that seemed to absorb light rather than merely blocking it. Where Kami was warm gold and growing things, this figure was cool starlight and the spaces between thoughts.
"What are you?" Naruto breathed.
"I am what she is not." The shadow-figure stepped forward, and Naruto caught glimpses of features—sharp cheekbones, eyes like chips of obsidian, a mouth that had never learned to smile easily. "Where she teaches harmony, I teach necessary discord. Where she shows you the light, I reveal the darkness that gives light meaning."
"You're here for me too?"
"We both are, though she doesn't know it yet." A sound that might have been laughter rustled through the clearing like dry leaves. "My name is Yami, little flame. And I have been watching you much longer than she has."
"Watching me do what?"
"Survive." The word carried granite certainty. "Not just the village's cruelty—that's simple enough. I've been watching you survive your own kindness. Watching you choose hope when despair would be easier. Watching you refuse to let their poison turn you into them."
Naruto's hands clenched involuntarily. "You've been watching me get beat up and you never helped?"
"Because you didn't need help surviving the beatings." Yami's obsidian gaze pinned him like a butterfly to cork. "You needed to learn that you could survive them. That pain, betrayal, abandonment—none of it could actually destroy the essential core of who you are."
"That's—that's messed up."
"Yes. It is." No denial, no justification. Just acknowledgment. "But it's also true. And truth, child of daylight, is my domain. Beautiful truth, ugly truth, terrible truth that cuts like broken glass. All of it."
Something about the figure's absolute honesty was more unsettling than any lie could have been. "What do you want with me?"
"To teach you what she cannot." Yami gestured toward where Kami had vanished. "She will show you light and growth and all the pretty aspects of power. But power without shadow is incomplete—weak, actually. You cannot truly understand joy without first accepting sorrow. You cannot appreciate peace without acknowledging the war inside yourself."
"What war?"
"The one between who you are and who they told you to be. The battle between your natural compassion and your justified rage. The conflict between wanting to belong and knowing you're meant for something far greater than their small, frightened lives."
Each word hit like a physical blow, not because they were cruel but because they were accurate. Naruto had felt that war his entire life—the constant tension between wanting acceptance and wanting to prove them all wrong, between forgiving them and hating them, between being normal and being... whatever he actually was.
"I don't understand."
"You will." Yami began to fade back into ordinary shadow. "When you're ready to learn about the parts of yourself that daylight can't reach, call my name into the darkness. I'll come."
"Wait! How do I—"
But the shadow-figure was already gone, leaving only the scent of night-blooming jasmine and questions that Naruto wasn't sure he wanted answered.
He sat by the stream until dawn touched the eastern horizon, thinking about light and darkness, harmony and discord, and the uncomfortable possibility that he might need both to become whatever he was supposed to be.
When he finally trudged back to the village, exhausted but strangely exhilarated, the early morning vendors were setting up their stalls. Most ignored him as usual, but Mrs. Tanaka at the fruit stand actually met his eyes and nodded.
It was small—microscopic, really. But it was something.
And for the first time in his life, Naruto Uzumaki walked through Konoha's streets feeling like he had secrets worth keeping.
# Chapter 3: Between Life and Death
The kunai screamed through the air like a silver prayer for blood.
Naruto's world contracted to pure instinct—muscles coiling, breath catching, time stretching like taffy in his mouth. The blade carved a deadly arc toward Mizuki's exposed back, thrown by some academy dropout with more rage than skill and a grudge that ran bone-deep.
Move.
The thought exploded through his nervous system faster than conscious decision. His body launched forward before his brain caught up, orange blur against autumn sky, small hands shoving hard between Mizuki's shoulder blades.
"Sensei, look out!"
The kunai meant for spine found ribs instead.
Steel punched through flesh with a wet thunk that seemed to echo off the academy walls. Fire bloomed across Naruto's chest—white-hot, absolute, stealing breath and sight and everything except the weird floating sensation of watching his own body crumple.
Huh, some distant part of his mind observed with clinical detachment. So that's what dying feels like.
"NARUTO!" Iruka's voice cracked like breaking stone.
The world tilted sideways. Sky became ground became sky again as Naruto's knees buckled and gravity reclaimed him. His orange jacket darkened with spreading crimson, and something warm and metallic filled his mouth.
"You little shit!" The dropout—Kenji, his name was Kenji, Naruto remembered with crystal clarity that seemed wildly inappropriate—snarled and reached for another weapon. "You ruined everything! That was supposed to be—"
Mizuki's fist connected with Kenji's temple, dropping him like a sack of grain. But Naruto barely registered the impact, too busy watching his own blood paint abstract art across academy courtyard stones.
"Stay with me!" Iruka dropped beside him, scarred hands pressing against the wound. "Medical nin! Someone get the medical nin!"
Naruto tried to speak, tried to say it was okay, tried to crack some stupid joke about how this was way more dramatic than any of his pranks. But his lungs had apparently forgotten how to process air, and darkness crept in from the edges of his vision like spilled ink.
Is this how it ends? The question drifted through his fading consciousness with surprising calm. Eight years old, bled out in a school yard, saving someone who probably wouldn't even remember my name next week?
Oddly enough, he found he didn't mind. Better to die protecting someone than to waste away unloved and unnoticed. Better this than growing old and bitter, carrying the village's hatred like a tumor in his chest.
The last thing he saw before darkness claimed him was Iruka's face—twisted with panic and something that looked almost like... caring?
Well, Naruto thought as the world dissolved. At least somebody will miss me.
---
Death, it turned out, had excellent interior decorating.
Naruto found himself standing in a vast space that wasn't quite room, wasn't quite landscape, but somehow managed to be both simultaneously. The floor beneath his bare feet felt like polished obsidian, reflecting a sky that shifted between twilight purple and starless black. In the distance, cherry trees bloomed in impossible abundance, their pale petals falling like snow that never reached the ground.
"Beautiful, isn't it?"
The voice came from everywhere and nowhere—neither commanding like Kami's nor unsettling like Yami's, but something altogether different. Patient. Ancient. Tinged with the kind of sadness that came from watching civilizations rise and fall like seasonal flowers.
Naruto spun, searching for the speaker. "Hello? Where am I? What is this place?"
"You are between." A figure stepped from behind the nearest cherry tree, and Naruto's breath caught. "Between life and death, between one moment and the next, between who you were and who you might become."
The newcomer was tall and lean, draped in robes that seemed woven from shadow and starlight. But where Yami had felt like living darkness, this figure radiated something else entirely—completion, maybe. Finality. The sense of stories ended and chapters closed.
Their face defied easy categorization—androgynous features that could have belonged to man or woman, young or old, beautiful or terrible depending on the angle of observation. Only their eyes remained constant: deep wells of twilight that held the weight of every farewell ever spoken.
"Who are you?" Naruto whispered.
"I am Shinigami." The figure's smile carried the melancholy of autumn leaves. "I am the one who stands at thresholds, who guides souls from one state of being to another. Some call me death god, but that's not quite accurate. I am more... transition specialist."
"Transition to what?"
"That depends entirely on you." Shinigami gestured, and suddenly they were walking together down a path that definitely hadn't existed moments before. Cherry petals drifted around them like confetti for a funeral. "Tell me, little flame—do you wish to continue forward, or would you prefer to return?"
"Return?" Hope flared in Naruto's chest. "I can go back? I'm not actually dead?"
"Not yet. You're balanced on the edge—a kunai through the lung, significant blood loss, but nothing irreversible if you choose quickly enough." Shinigami's pace never varied, unhurried as geological time. "But choosing to return means accepting everything that comes with life. The pain, the loneliness, the constant struggle against a world that doesn't understand you."
"And choosing to go forward means...?"
"Peace. Rest. An end to suffering." The death god's voice held infinite compassion. "No more beatings, no more cruel words, no more nights spent wondering why you weren't born to parents who could love you. Just... stillness."
The offer hung between them like a bridge across an abyss. Part of Naruto—a larger part than he wanted to admit—felt the temptation like gravity. How easy it would be to simply let go, to stop fighting, to rest.
"It would hurt them, though, wouldn't it?" The words surprised him. "If I died, I mean. Iruka-sensei looked... scared."
"Yes," Shinigami acknowledged. "It would hurt him very much."
"And Kami and Yami—they said they wanted to teach me things. If I die now, they won't get to finish."
"That's true as well."
Naruto stopped walking. Around them, the cherry trees swayed in a wind he couldn't feel, their petals creating patterns in the air like written poems. "You're not going to try to convince me either way, are you?"
"That wouldn't be fair. This choice must be entirely yours." Shinigami turned to face him fully, twilight eyes reflecting depths of starless space. "But I will tell you this—in all my eons of existence, I have never encountered a soul quite like yours."
"What do you mean?"
"Most people, when they reach this threshold, are weighted down by regrets. Things they should have said, chances they should have taken, love they should have given or received. But you..." The death god's expression grew thoughtful. "You have lived eight years of pain and rejection, and yet your soul burns clean. No bitterness, no festering resentment, no poison eating you from within."
"That's not true." Naruto's hands clenched involuntarily. "Sometimes I hate them. Sometimes I want to hurt them back."
"Wanting and doing are different things. Feeling and acting are different choices." Shinigami's smile held surprising warmth. "You have every right to your anger, little flame. What matters is what you do with it."
"I don't understand."
"You saved Mizuki today—a man who has never shown you kindness, who looks at you with the same suspicion as the rest of the village. You didn't hesitate, didn't calculate whether he deserved rescue. You simply acted."
"Anyone would have—"
"No." The interruption carried absolute certainty. "Most would have hesitated, weighed the cost, considered their own safety. You saw someone in danger and responded instantly, without thought for yourself. That kind of selfless courage is extraordinarily rare."
Heat built behind Naruto's eyes—not tears, exactly, but something close. "I don't feel courageous. I feel scared and confused and like I'm making everything up as I go along."
"Welcome to being alive." Shinigami's laugh held surprising warmth. "Courage isn't the absence of fear, little flame. It's acting despite the fear, choosing to move forward even when you can't see the destination."
They stood in comfortable silence for a moment, surrounded by falling petals and the distant sound of wind through impossible trees. When Shinigami spoke again, their voice carried a different quality—not commanding, but somehow inevitable.
"I'm going to tell you something that the others haven't, because it's my nature to speak of endings and you need to understand what you're choosing." The death god's expression grew grave. "The path they want to guide you down—it will not be easy. You will face tests that push you beyond anything you can currently imagine. You will be asked to make choices that have no good answers. And at the end of it all, you may find that the price of your strength is a loneliness deeper than anything you've known."
"Why are you telling me this?"
"Because you deserve to choose with full knowledge." Shinigami gestured toward the path ahead, which seemed to stretch into infinite distance. "Power always comes with a cost, and divine power most of all. If you return to life, if you accept their training, you will become something unprecedented in your world. But unprecedented things are often... isolated."
The words hit like physical blows, but Naruto found himself standing straighter rather than cowering. "Will I be able to help people?"
"Yes."
"Will I be able to protect the ones who matter?"
"If you grow strong enough, wise enough, and if you're willing to pay the price."
"Will I become someone worth knowing?"
Shinigami's expression grew infinitely gentle. "Little flame, you already are. The question is whether you'll believe it long enough to let others see it too."
Something crystallized in Naruto's chest—not quite decision, but the shape of one. "If I go back, will you still be there? Not to talk to, I mean, but... around?"
"Death is always around, in one form or another. But more than that—" The god's smile carried promise and warning in equal measure. "I believe our paths will cross again, Naruto Uzumaki. And when they do, I hope you'll remember this conversation."
"What should I remember about it?"
"That every ending is also a beginning. That death gives life meaning, and sacrifice gives love weight. And that sometimes the greatest victory is simply choosing to continue when everything in you wants to stop."
The cherry grove began to fade around them, colors bleeding away like watercolor in rain. But Shinigami's voice followed him as consciousness returned:
"Live well, little flame. Live with purpose. And when your final threshold comes—many, many years from now—cross it with the same courage you showed today."
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Pain exploded through Naruto's chest like liquid fire.
He bolted upright with a gasp that sounded more like a scream, hands clutching at bandages wrapped tight around his ribs. Sterile hospital smell flooded his nostrils—antiseptic and fear and the lingering ghost of cherry blossoms that definitely shouldn't have been there.
"Easy, easy!" Gentle hands pushed him back down onto crisp white sheets. "You're safe, Naruto. You're in the hospital."
Iruka's face swam into focus above him, worried and exhausted and sporting what looked like several new gray hairs. Behind him, a medical nin with tired eyes and healing-green chakra coating her palms monitored various beeping machines.
"Iruka-sensei?" Naruto's voice came out as a croak. "What happened? Is Mizuki okay?"
"He's fine, you idiot." But Iruka's insult carried no heat, only overwhelming relief. "The question is what were you thinking, throwing yourself at a kunai like that?"
"Wasn't thinking." Naruto tried to sit up again, winced at the sharp protest from his chest. "Just moved."
"Just moved," Iruka repeated flatly. "You 'just moved' directly into the path of a weapon that could have killed you."
"But it didn't kill me." The words came out more wonderingly than Naruto had intended. "I'm still here."
"Barely." The medical nin—her name tag read 'Satomi'—gave him a look that could have stripped paint. "Three inches to the left and that kunai would have hit your heart. You lost a lot of blood, went into shock, technically died for about thirty seconds before we got you back."
Died for thirty seconds. That explained the cherry grove, the twilight-eyed god, the choice between forward and back. Naruto touched his chest gingerly, feeling the thick bandages and the tender ache of healing flesh beneath.
"How long was I out?"
"Two days." Iruka's voice carried undertones Naruto couldn't quite identify. "We weren't sure you were going to wake up."
"But I did." Something in Naruto's chest felt different—not the injury, but something deeper. As if dying, even briefly, had shifted something fundamental in his spiritual architecture. "I chose to come back."
Iruka's expression grew puzzled. "Chose?"
"Nothing. Never mind." Naruto shifted carefully, testing his range of motion. "Can I go home soon?"
"Tomorrow, if your vitals stay stable." Satomi made notes on his chart with efficient strokes. "But you're on light duty for the next month. No missions, no heavy training, no stupid stunts that involve throwing yourself at sharp objects."
"Got it." But Naruto's mind was already racing ahead to tomorrow night, to the oak grove where Kami would be waiting. Would she know what had happened? Would Yami? And what about the third figure—Shinigami, who had offered him peace and then sent him back to chaos?
"Naruto." Iruka's voice carried unusual weight. "What you did... that was incredibly brave. Stupid, reckless, and completely against every survival instinct a ninja should have, but brave."
"Anyone would have—"
"No, they wouldn't have." Iruka's interruption echoed Shinigami's words with eerie precision. "Most people would have hesitated, calculated, considered their own safety first. You didn't. You saw someone in danger and you acted, without hesitation, without thought for yourself."
The parallels made Naruto's skin prickle. "It wasn't that big a deal."
"It was to me." Iruka's voice went quiet, almost shy. "I've never had anyone... no one's ever put themselves at risk for my sake before. It means something, Naruto. It means a lot."
Heat spread through Naruto's chest that had nothing to do with injury and everything to do with being seen, being valued, being... cared about. "Really?"
"Really." Iruka's smile could have powered the village. "You're a good kid, Naruto Uzumaki. Don't let anyone tell you different."
As the medical nin finished her checks and left them alone, Naruto lay back against his pillows and stared at the ceiling. The fluorescent lights hummed overhead, casting harsh shadows that seemed to writhe and dance in his peripheral vision.
He'd died. Briefly, technically, but still—he'd crossed the threshold between life and death and chosen to return. And in that space between heartbeats, he'd spoken with a god who specialized in endings and new beginnings.
Tomorrow night, he would have questions for his divine mentors. About choice and sacrifice, about power and its prices, about what it meant to live with purpose when the world seemed determined to grind that purpose into dust.
But tonight, in this sterile hospital room with machines beeping reassurance and Iruka dozing in the chair beside his bed, Naruto felt something he'd never experienced before:
The absolute certainty that his life mattered to someone.
It was a small feeling, fragile as spun glass, but it burned in his chest like a candle flame that no amount of darkness could extinguish.
And somewhere in the space between sleeping and waking, he could have sworn he heard cherry petals falling like whispered promises on a wind that smelled of infinite possibilities.
# Chapter 4: The Weight of Secrets
The ramen shop's steam curled through afternoon air like incense for the desperate and hungry.
Naruto hunched over his bowl—his third bowl, because near-death experiences apparently came with ravenous appetites—slurping noodles with the focused intensity of a monk at prayer. Across the tiny booth, Iruka nursed his first serving and watched with that expression adults got when they were trying to figure out how an eight-year-old could pack away enough food to feed a small army.
"Slow down," Iruka chuckled, dodging a splash of broth. "The ramen isn't going anywhere."
"You don't know that." Naruto paused mid-slurp, deadly serious. "What if there's a ramen shortage? What if this is the last good bowl in the village? What if—"
"What if you actually chew your food instead of inhaling it?"
"But then it takes longer to get to the good part."
"The good part is supposed to last, Naruto. That's the point."
Something in Iruka's tone made Naruto look up from his bowl. The academy instructor was smiling, but it was one of those complicated adult smiles that meant twelve different things at once. Happy-sad-worried-proud-scared, all tangled together like fishing line left too long in the sun.
"Are you okay, Iruka-sensei?"
"Shouldn't I be asking you that?" Iruka gestured vaguely at Naruto's chest, where fresh bandages lurked beneath his orange jacket. "You're the one who decided to use his ribcage as a kunai holster."
"I'm fine." And weirdly, he was. The pain had faded to a dull ache, manageable as background noise. More concerning was the way his chakra felt different—deeper somehow, like a well that had been drilled down to reach underground rivers. "Really. I feel... better than fine, actually."
Iruka's expression sharpened. "Better how?"
Crap. Naruto's chopsticks suddenly required his complete attention. How was he supposed to explain that dying had apparently unlocked something fundamental in his spiritual architecture? That he could feel the earth's pulse through the soles of his feet, even sitting in this cramped ramen stand? That shadows whispered at the edges of his vision and something vast and patient watched him from beyond the veil between worlds?
"Just... better. Like I figured something out." True enough, even if he couldn't explain what. "Like I know who I am now."
"And who are you?"
The question hung in the steamy air between them, deceptively simple and impossibly complex. Three days ago, Naruto would have said he was nobody special—the village idiot, the class failure, the walking reminder of tragedy that everyone wished would disappear.
Now?
"I'm someone worth saving," he said quietly. "Someone worth teaching. Someone who matters."
Iruka's chopsticks clattered into his bowl. "Naruto..."
"I know it sounds stupid—"
"It doesn't sound stupid. It sounds like the first intelligent thing you've ever said about yourself." Iruka's voice carried enough conviction to stop traffic. "I just wish it hadn't taken a near-death experience for you to figure it out."
If only you knew the half of it, Naruto thought, but aloud he said, "Sometimes it takes big things to change small minds."
"Small minds?" Iruka raised an eyebrow. "Where did that come from?"
Another trap. Naruto couldn't exactly explain that a death god had spent their afterlife conversation teaching him about courage and purpose and the weight of choices made in crisis moments. "I don't know. Just something I heard somewhere."
The lie tasted like ash in his mouth. Three days of divine mentorship, and he was already keeping secrets from the first person who'd ever bothered to take him for ramen. But what was the alternative? Hey, Iruka-sensei, funny story—I've been talking to nature spirits and shadow entities and death gods who want to teach me cosmic truths. Pass the soy sauce?
"Naruto." Iruka's voice had gone gentle, which somehow made it scarier than when he yelled. "You know you can talk to me, right? About anything."
"I know."
"Do you? Because you're doing that thing where you answer too fast and don't meet my eyes."
Busted. Naruto forced himself to look up, meeting Iruka's concerned gaze with what he hoped passed for innocence. "I'm fine, sensei. Really. Just... processing stuff."
"What kind of stuff?"
The kind where gods want to train me in cosmic balance and I'm pretty sure I'm supposed to become something that doesn't exist yet. "Normal stuff. Life stuff. You know."
Iruka studied him for a long moment, brown eyes reflecting depths of patience and something that might have been understanding. "Okay. But when you're ready to talk about the abnormal stuff—and we both know there's abnormal stuff—I'll be here."
The words hit Naruto like a physical blow, warm and unexpected and terrifying in their sincerity. When was the last time someone had offered to listen? When had anyone ever suggested that his problems might be worth their time?
"Thanks," he managed, voice smaller than he'd intended.
"Don't thank me yet. You haven't seen my new training regimen."
"New training regimen?"
Iruka's smile turned predatory. "You think throwing yourself at weapons makes you a hero? Fine. Let's see how heroic you feel after two hours of target practice, followed by taijutsu drills, followed by meditation exercises to work on that impulse control."
"Meditation?" The word came out strangled.
"Sitting still. Breathing properly. Thinking before acting." Iruka's grin could have cut glass. "Revolutionary concepts, I know."
Oh, if only you knew, Naruto thought. Meditation was exactly what Kami had been teaching him—feeling the earth's pulse, connecting with natural energy, learning to work with his chakra instead of wrestling it into submission. But how could he explain that he'd already mastered basic breathing techniques without revealing his nocturnal divine tutorials?
"That sounds... great," he said weakly.
"Enthusiasm like that will take you far." Iruka signaled for the check, then paused. "Actually, there's something else we need to discuss."
"Your performance in class has been... different lately."
Naruto's stomach dropped. "Different how?"
"More focused. Less disruptive. Your chakra control exercises yesterday were practically flawless." Iruka's expression grew thoughtful. "It's like someone's been giving you private lessons."
Technically true. "Maybe I just needed motivation."
"What kind of motivation involves perfect meditation posture and chakra flow patterns that most students take months to develop?"
The question landed like a kunai between the ribs. Naruto opened his mouth, closed it, opened it again. What was he supposed to say? That a nature goddess had taught him harmony meditation under an ancient oak? That shadow entities had shown him how to listen to his chakra's natural rhythms? That dying had apparently unlocked spiritual awareness most people never developed?
"I've been practicing." Another truth wrapped in lies.
"Where? When? I've seen your apartment, Naruto—it's the size of a closet and you spend most evenings pulling pranks or eating instant ramen."
At night, in a sacred grove, with divine beings who glow like captured starlight. "I found a quiet place outside the village. Near the old training grounds."
Close enough to truth to avoid the worst of the guilt. Iruka's expression shifted, cycling through surprise, concern, and something that might have been approval.
"You've been training alone? At night?"
"It's peaceful out there. No one bothers me."
"Naruto, that's incredibly dangerous. Wild animals, bandits, hostile ninja—"
"I'm careful." And protected by beings that could probably level mountains if they felt like it. "I just... needed space to think. To figure things out without everyone watching."
Iruka's protest died on his lips, replaced by understanding so profound it made Naruto's chest ache. "You wanted somewhere they couldn't reach you."
"Yeah." The word came out raw, stripped of pretense. "Somewhere I could just... be."
They sat in silence for a moment, surrounded by the comfortable chaos of the ramen shop—bubbling broth, clinking ceramics, the low murmur of conversations in a dozen different dialects. Outside, Konoha's afternoon bustle provided a soundtrack of normalcy that felt increasingly foreign.
"I get it," Iruka said finally. "Needing space. Wanting to prove yourself without an audience." He met Naruto's eyes, expression serious. "But promise me something."
"What?"
"Promise me you'll be careful out there. And if you ever feel like you're in over your head—with training, with anything—you'll come to me."
The sincerity in his voice made Naruto's throat tight. "I promise."
Another lie, because what was he supposed to do when divine entities started teaching him cosmic truths that could reshape reality? Drag Iruka into the middle of god-politics and spiritual evolution? But the intent behind the promise felt real enough—if things went sideways, if he needed help, Iruka would be there.
"Good." Iruka dropped coins on the table and stood. "Now come on. Let's see if your newfound meditation skills translate to actual ninja techniques."
They walked toward the academy through streets that buzzed with late afternoon energy. Vendors hawked everything from weapons to vegetables, civilians hurried between errands, and ninja flickered across rooftops in blurs of controlled chakra. Normal village life, proceeding with clockwork efficiency.
But Naruto could feel the wrongness beneath it all. The way conversations stopped when they passed. The way mothers pulled children closer. The way even friendly merchants' smiles faltered when they recognized him.
Monster. Demon. Mistake.
The words whispered at the edges of hearing, carried on wind that tasted of old fear and newer hatred. Three days ago, it would have crushed him. Now, armored with divine affirmation and Iruka's unexpected faith, it felt more like background noise.
"Ignore them," Iruka said quietly.
"I am."
"Good. Their fear doesn't define you."
No, Naruto thought, but it might define what I become.
The academy's training yard stretched before them, scarred earth bearing testimony to generations of young ninja learning to channel destruction into art. Wooden practice posts stood like patient sentinels, their surfaces carved with the memories of countless kunai and shuriken.
"Show me what you've learned," Iruka said, settling against a fence post. "Start with basic chakra control. Form a clone—just one—and hold it for sixty seconds."
Easy enough. Naruto formed the familiar hand seals, but instead of forcing his chakra into submission, he asked it politely to cooperate. Please help me, he thought. I want to learn.
Golden light flickered around him like captured sunfire. A perfect shadow clone materialized beside him—solid, grinning, radiating mischief and determination in equal measure.
"Holy shit," the clone said, examining its hands with wonder. "We actually did it right."
"Language," Naruto and Iruka said simultaneously.
The clone lasted ninety seconds before dissolving in a puff of satisfied smoke. Iruka's expression had gone very still, very focused, like a hunter tracking dangerous prey.
"Again," he said. "This time, make three."
Three clones appeared without effort, each one perfect and stable and utterly impossible given Naruto's previous track record. They high-fived each other and started an impromptu juggling routine with practice kunai.
"Show-offs," original Naruto muttered, but he was grinning.
"Dispel them," Iruka ordered, voice tight. "Now."
The clones popped out of existence, leaving only memory-smoke and the echo of laughter. In the sudden silence, Iruka stared at Naruto with an expression caught between awe and alarm.
"Where did you learn that?"
"I told you—I've been practicing."
"Naruto." Iruka's voice carried teacher-authority, the kind that brooked no evasion. "Three months ago, you couldn't make a single stable clone. Yesterday, you were managing one at a time with significant effort. Today, you're creating multiple perfect copies like it's the easiest thing in the world. That doesn't happen overnight."
"Maybe I'm a late bloomer."
"That's not late blooming. That's..." Iruka paused, searching for words. "That's the kind of improvement that comes from intensive, specialized training. The kind you get from a jounin-level instructor."
Or divine entities, Naruto thought, but kept his expression carefully neutral. "Does it matter? I'm finally getting better."
"It matters because I need to know who's teaching you." Iruka stepped closer, proximity turning conversation into interrogation. "Is it Kakashi? Asuma? Someone from ANBU?"
"It's not—"
"Because if a high-ranking ninja is giving you private lessons without going through proper channels, that raises questions. Big ones."
Panic fluttered in Naruto's chest like a caged bird. He'd never considered that his rapid improvement might attract official attention. In his mind, getting better was purely positive—proof that he wasn't the hopeless failure everyone believed him to be.
He hadn't thought about surveillance. About investigations. About what happened when eight-year-old academy failures suddenly started displaying skills that defied explanation.
"No one's teaching me." Technically true—Kami, Yami, and Shinigami weren't technically people. "I swear, Iruka-sensei. I've just been working really hard."
Iruka studied him for a long moment, brown eyes reflecting depths of concern and growing suspicion. "Show me your meditation posture."
Without thinking, Naruto dropped into the position Kami had taught him—spine straight but relaxed, hands resting loosely on his knees, breathing deep and even. Perfect form that would have taken most students weeks to develop.
"Where did you learn that?"
"I..." Naruto's mind raced. "I saw it in a book?"
"What book?"
"I don't remember the title."
"Who wrote it?"
"I didn't pay attention to—"
"Naruto." Iruka's voice had gone deadly quiet. "I've been teaching academy students for five years. I know what self-taught improvement looks like, and this isn't it. Someone with significant skill has been training you, and I need to know who."
The weight of secrets pressed against Naruto's chest like physical stones. Part of him wanted to tell the truth—to explain about divine mentors and cosmic balance and the strange new awareness that hummed in his bones like distant music.
But another part, the part that had learned caution through eight years of disappointment, whispered warnings. What if he doesn't believe you? What if he thinks you're lying? What if this ruins everything?
"I can't tell you," he said finally.
"Can't or won't?"
"Does it matter?"
Iruka's expression went through several complicated shifts—hurt, anger, understanding, resignation. "It matters because I care about you, you stubborn little—" He caught himself, scrubbed a hand through his hair. "Naruto, if you're in some kind of trouble, if someone's pressuring you or threatening you—"
"It's not like that." The words burst out before Naruto could stop them. "It's good. The training, I mean. It's helping me become... better."
"Better how?"
Stronger. Wiser. More connected to the fundamental forces that shape reality. "Just better. Like I'm finally becoming who I'm supposed to be."
Iruka stared at him for a long moment, conflict warring across his scarred features. When he spoke again, his voice carried the weight of difficult decisions.
"Okay. I won't push. But I'm trusting you, Naruto—really trusting you—not to do anything stupid or dangerous or self-destructive. Can you promise me that?"
Another impossible promise, but this one felt different. This one came from someone who cared enough to let him keep his secrets, even when those secrets scared him.
"I promise," Naruto said, and meant it as much as he could.
"Good." Iruka's smile was strained but genuine. "Now let's see if your mysterious training covers taijutsu forms."
They spent the next hour working through basic combat kata, and with each movement, Naruto felt the gulf between his new abilities and old limitations widening like a chasm. His body moved with fluid grace that should have taken years to develop. His chakra flowed like water finding its level, effortless and natural.
And through it all, Iruka watched with growing unease, as if witnessing something that defied the natural order.
By the time they finished, the sun had painted the sky in shades of amber and rose. Academy grounds lay empty except for the echo of their footsteps and the whisper of evening wind through practice equipment.
"I should get home," Naruto said, suddenly exhausted by the weight of pretending normalcy.
"Yeah." Iruka's voice carried undertones of reluctance. "Naruto? Whatever's happening with you—whoever's teaching you—just... be careful, okay? Sometimes the people who offer to make us stronger have their own agendas."
The warning hit closer to home than Iruka could have known. What were divine mentors but beings with their own incomprehensible agendas? What did gods want with mortal children, really?
"I'll be careful," Naruto promised, and hoped it was true.
They parted ways at the academy gates, Iruka heading toward the village center while Naruto took the long route home. As he walked through streets that grew emptier with each block, he felt the familiar weight of isolation settling around his shoulders like a heavy cloak.
But tonight, it felt different. Not crushing, but... anticipatory.
Because tonight, when the moon reached its peak, he would return to the sacred grove. He would face his divine mentors with new questions and harder truths. He would continue down a path that promised transformation at costs he couldn't yet calculate.
And somewhere in the growing darkness between streetlights, he could have sworn he heard cherry petals falling like whispered secrets on wind that carried the scent of infinite possibilities.
The boy who walked through Konoha's shadowed streets was still Naruto Uzumaki—still eight years old, still carrying secrets too large for his small frame. But he was also something new, something the village had never seen before.
He was a bridge between worlds, walking the knife's edge between mortal concerns and divine mysteries.
And the weight of that knowledge sat in his chest like a second heartbeat, steady and strange and utterly transformative.
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